Another minor error: early on you state that the technician who greets the fork is spooked because they see the "stop me" message; but I find nothing to support this in the adventure; to the contrary my reading of it suggests the forks are treated indifferent and the message is private. Few more comments: * Nonny is discussed in two different places, combine them * add page references to the handout, referring both to its own pages, as well as to the adventure and book pages. For example, whenever Kjell Hoff is mentioned, add a note on which page of the prep note/main adventure plot he is mentioned, etc. I spend too much time flipping through the pages looking for the entry. * missing notes for Nkeka not found on her bio - 1) 3rd Firewall agent assigned to the case stayed behind and is still looking for Arman Usrupow, and 2) the name of the settlement Arman was looking for (only found on Arman's bio-entry sketch) After running the adventure using the items provided, in a 4-5h con slot, I have the following comments/suggestions, primarily for the same environment. For anybody running this as a 8-16h regular adventure, you may disregard most of them: * for 4-5h slot, use B5 before Roque/Park, skip any interference by the forks, change locations of encounters with B7 and B8 to the final arena, avoid any but the final combat, and expect to story tell most of it (I had my players make mostly <5 rolls in the final combat per character); * remember B3 is Nkeka's contact, and the Firewall agent is very useful in the adventure, so my suggested character distribution list is B3, Nkeka, B1, B2, B4, B5; * add more details on the militia - have names for principal investigators, they form an alternative to obtaining muscle other than the Triad, and can arrange for express res leaving of Kjell (be prepared to stat him as an NPC for Nkeka); * add more useful equipment for Kjell's stack, such as the Viewers, and another utilitool; * in fork's bar equipment cache, replace useless and weird Gardener swarm with a much more useful Cleaner nanoswarm; * Nkeka starts with Kjell's bio handout, Nkeka and B3 share Arman Usrupow bio handout, * to reduce the amount of what players need to read, cross out all the useless implants: Circadian regulation, Ghostrider module, Hyper Linguist; Math Boost; Echolocation, or consider replacing with something actually useful; I have also updated my own handout; v.1.1 is available [url=https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B-kv3qFxxFlFSndJdGVYSFpQdUE]here[/url]: minor changes (few more items cloned so all players can have their own handouts), plus muse skills added to Nkeka and Roque.

I didn't bother with any maps. It's totally unnecessary for the habitat, and to be honest, pretty useless for the air processing plant too. Maybe the latter would be useful if you were using minis, but even then, it's not like any maps are scaled for them.