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Exenter: A TITAN Machine inspired by my Nightmares.

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ThatWhichNeverWas ThatWhichNeverWas's picture
Exenter: A TITAN Machine inspired by my Nightmares.
“This is bullshit. I don't care if Amistad has a “Bad Feeling”, this thing is our ticket to the Good-times. …No. No! It's a derelict, the best I've ever seen! If there'd been any sign of trouble whatsoever, I'd be hitting the charges as we speak and coasting back to the Swarm, but no, there's nothing. He's freaking out because the ship doesn't look like it an Autocannon used it as a tissue." "Yeah, okay, finding a ship without anyone aboard is freaky, but there's no blood, no broken components, no sign that there was anyone on there to begin with. The crew were probably just ghosts in the system, and just left." "Are you shitting me? He's scared there might be Spiders on board? He's going to piss all over our one good break in 3 years because he's a fuckin' arachnophobe?!" "Alright, where the hell is he, we're going to have words. What do you mean you can't find him on the spines? Crazy bastard must have hacked them. [size=10]Didn’t know he could do that.[/size] Just go find him, I'll watch things from here." "He'll turn up eventually.” -Last recording of the “Penny Farthing” salvage tug out of the “Wild Black Yonder” scumswarm. Inspection drones sent to board the ship after it attempted to rejoin the swarm without mesh response found no-one on board. In accordance with quarantine protocol, the tug was destroyed via plasma lance. ----- Exenters are a TITAN device who's existence has only been confirmed relatively recently. Their body resembles that of a Redback Spider, with a bulbous “abdomen” connected to approximately spherical thorax with 10 long, spindly legs, and an arrow shaped head. This has only been found due to examinations of destroyed specimens, as the entirety of the drone is covered with metamaterials rendering it invisible to sight and sound. It sees through a dusting of nano-cameras on top of the shell, which communicate with the drone through magnetic resonance. As such, it takes a -40 perception roll to tell whether there is something there at all, which allows the viewer to perceive occasional motion as light reflects off the flacks of dust, making the viewer aware of the Exenter's presence and gives a vague impression of it's shape, although this may not be more than "transparent thing with too many legs". The magnetic communication is dimly perceivable via electric sense; morphs with this upgrade may make a -20 perception roll instead. Splashing the drone with a liquid or inflicting damage to it ruins the metamaterial properties, allowing the drone to be perceived normally. Exenters do not engage in open combat, rather they engage on guerilla and psychological warfare. Their modus operandi is to approach their target, and when an opportune moment presents itself the abdomen splits into 6 “petals”, which engulf the target completely. Anyone who happens to be viewing the attack simply sees the morph disappear, but usually all that occurs is that a witness looks away for a second, only to look back to see that their comrade has disappeared. The thorax is completely soundproof, and very sturdy – it takes a SOMx2 check to break free. The Exenter then takes it's prey to a safe location, where it can begin it's work. Using the plethora of smartblades and utilitools within it's carapace, it begins to perform surgery on it's victim, methodically removing any and all artificial augmentations, and damaging or disabling bioware, all whilst being extremely careful to keep it's victim alive and conscious. It's skill is sufficient that it can completely remove any and all augmentations, including nanoware, with a minimum of blood loss. It then leaves it's victim somewhere where the screams will attract others, and when they arrive it uses the distraction to take another, and the cycle repeats until no more prey is available. If many targets are available, Exenters will usually attack targets with the least augmentations first in order to disrupt the others which may prove more dangerous. Synthmorphs are not subject to the above behaviour, they are simply dismantled in their entirety. Once all targets have been removed, the Exenter then dismantles the corpses with internal recyclers. Biomorphs are converted to normal feedstock, whilst synthmorphs or removed augmentations are used to assemble new Exenters. Strangely, Exenters will not use any other source of materials for reproduction, only those taken from prey. Cognition 10, Coordination 20, Intuition 15, Reflexes 20, Savvy 5, Somatics 15, Willpower 15 Initiative 7, Speed 2, Durability 30, Wound Threshold 6 Mobility System: Walker (7/28) Skills: Climbing 70, Freefall 70, Freerunning 70 Fray 60, Infiltration 95, Investigation 40, Exotic Melee Weapon: Engulf 65 Perception 60, Unarmed Combat 55, Medicine: Implant Surgery 100 Notes: Armor 6/6, Unarmed Attack (1d10 + 2), Invisible. Implant removal is a task action with a time of 5 minutes, which removes one implant and deals 1DV ignoring armour and 1d10+2 SV, WILLx3 for half. The Exenter will perform this for every augmentation the morph possesses, after which it will perform another surgery check to purposefully disable the morph's mobility systems. -Edit- Anatomy error corrected, Freefall and Freerunning skills added. -Edit 2- Made less invisible. What do you guys think? Are invisible surgery spiders creepy enough? Feedback would be very welcome :D
In the past we've had to compensate for weaknesses, finding quick solutions that only benefit a few. But what if we never need to feel weak or morally conflicted again?
ORCACommander ORCACommander's picture
completely invisible is
completely invisible is mitigating some of the creepy but otherwise very nice. How does it finish off its victims? it does the sniper's gambit of baiting out the medic and bait out the companions but leaves them screaming in pain. Just remember titans have a thing for fractals so synths should be arranged in fractal patterns :P
ThatWhichNeverWas ThatWhichNeverWas's picture
Fractals "are" very pretty...
ORCACommander wrote:
completely invisible is mitigating some of the creepy
Really? I was trying to play with the idea that the scariest monster is the one you don't, or rather can't, see. The anatomy was originally just a Healing Vat/Surgery Pod with legs, with the spider equivalency coming later. I mean, giant spiders are scary, but not as scary as walking down an abandoned road/corridor and knowing that something is following you but you can't see it. Or the big bad ultimate who's your team's combat monkey vanishing mid-sentence only to turn up a half an hour later wailing in unthinkable agony because his face is on the ceiling and he's lying in the middle of a spiral made out of his drug glands and leg bones and the top of his head is open and parts of his brain are missing and oh god where's his stack and there's something moving and oh shit where's Brian run run get to the ship it's behind me I know it's behind me close the airlock close you BITCH blow the emergency bolts [size=10]oh thank god oh sweet jesus[/size] I need to get home I need to tell people setting course and WHY IS THE SHUTTLE 87 KILOS OVERWEIG-[color=red]*squish*[/color]
ORCACommander wrote:
How does it finish off its victims?
Ahh, who need's to finish them off. Just leave them be, everything'll sort itself out in a few days anyway. :D
In the past we've had to compensate for weaknesses, finding quick solutions that only benefit a few. But what if we never need to feel weak or morally conflicted again?
Leodiensian Leodiensian's picture
I do enjoy the way it plays
I do enjoy the way it plays into certain horror movie tropes. "Hey guys, I'll just go around this corner." "Okay, Jimmy, we'll be right behind - FUCK where'd he go?" That said, how BIG is one of these things, on average? I mean, at first I thought it was a spider-size but then it's thorax opens to swallow people whole.. I think the size would make the near-perfect stealth thing a little more difficult to swallow, but if it's one of these things in a BIG ship then that would be more plausible than if it was a whole swarm of them.
ORCACommander ORCACommander's picture
Being completely unseen does
Being completely unseen does not phase me as it would be the same as being very competent at hiding. Now If its something that is very hazy or smokey and and never gets beyond your peripheral vision That is Unerving
ThatWhichNeverWas ThatWhichNeverWas's picture
My mind is a very happy place.
Leodiensian wrote:
That said, how BIG is one of these things, on average? I mean, at first I thought it was a spider-size but then it's thorax opens to swallow people whole.. I think the size would make the near-perfect stealth thing a little more difficult to swallow
Firstly, I just realized I screwed up the anatomy term... it's the abdomen that's supposed to engulf people, not the thorax. Pretty big screwup there, and I'll correct that immediately. I didn't want to go too far with the description, again to play up the unseen factor, but the one that lives in my brain has a head and thorax about the size of a bowling ball, with an abdomen "when empty" that's about 75cm across - it's pretty much all smart materials so it can pack itself pretty tightly. When it engulfs prey, the abdomen can swell up to become a hollow sphere with I diameter of about 3 meters, distortable as needed according to the victim's anatomy. So yeah, it can become pretty big... but it's totally invisible. One of these could be standing right in front of you, or be attached to the ceiling directly over your head, and you wouldn't be able to see it. In any ship where the corridors are large enough for two people to pass each other... which should be just about all of them... they shouldn't have any problem concealing themselves or moving around. Nonetheless, I wouldn't throw many of these at a group at once, as a slow winnowing is better at creating tension than having half the group get nuked at once. 1 to 3 should suffice for anything less than a plot about a full habitat infestation.
ORCACommander wrote:
Being completely unseen does not phase me as it would be the same as being very competent at hiding. Now If its something that is very hazy or smokey and and never gets beyond your peripheral vision That is Unerving
Horrible torture machines being very good at hiding doesn't phase you? We're very different people :P That said, and purely theoretically and definately not something I'd been considering anyway but was tending away from because it's a bit Dr Who... what would you think of a Schrödinger-esque Async exsurgent which only exists when not being consciously perceived? Something that you catch out of the corner of your eye, or you think you see in a window, but when you actively look it's not there, because the act of looking made it cease to exist in that location?
In the past we've had to compensate for weaknesses, finding quick solutions that only benefit a few. But what if we never need to feel weak or morally conflicted again?
ORCACommander ORCACommander's picture
how can i be afraid of
how can i be afraid of something i do not know is present? thanks to militant whovians i avoid dr who like a plague so it never enters my thinking. doesn't have to be a Schroedinger issue just very quick and you feel the air currents on the back of you neck shift when it moves.
ThatWhichNeverWas ThatWhichNeverWas's picture
Oh, fine....
After consultation with a neutral 3rd party, I conceed the point that there needs to be some way telling that there's something to be scared of for it to be creepy. I've edited the part about perception tests to make it easier to see, and increased the amount that can be seen. A bit. It's still normally invisible, because that's the whole point, but a decent (or fudged ;P) perception roll will tell you that scary robot monsters are coming for your organs.
ORCACommander wrote:
doesn't have to be a Schroedinger issue just very quick and you feel the air currents on the back of you neck shift when it moves.
Ehh, things that are just quick don't do anything for me. I mean, in real life they're startling, but without visual input to back it up, they seem a bit dull. No, I think violating physical law is the way to go.
In the past we've had to compensate for weaknesses, finding quick solutions that only benefit a few. But what if we never need to feel weak or morally conflicted again?