Might as well get the ball rolling, eh?
Page 15 - "They use as part of the process to wipe the brains of biomorphs when it’s absolutely
essential that the previous ego be fully eradicated."
Should be "They use it"? or "They are used"?
Page 26 - "Given the increase in mind operations and general surface explorations, however, the possibility of disturbing something that has remained so far dormant continues to be a risk."
Should be "increase in mining operation"? Mind operations doesn't really make sense, and the context of the sidebar is about mining.
Page 164 - Might be more of a GM Fiat situation, but shouldn't Suryas have the Large Target (+10 to Hit) disadvantage, much like the Neotenic has the Small Target (-10 to Hit) advantage?
Also, shouldn't Coronal Adaption be an Advantage in the Salamander/Sundiver/Surya? It is after all a Trait, not an implant.
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