Hello Folks Time to break down all that is holy and Show Posthuman Studios that they are still just human ^_^ First Up: Page 12: How the conspiracy came together. n p. 14 Precursors: Many diverse groups laid the foundation for Firewall's existence. n p. 16 Xmode: Firewall's founding conference. n p. 22 The First Schism: The split that defined the backups, conservatives, and [b]pragmat[/b] n pp. 23 and 46 I think you mean Pragmatists or Pragmatics? The Second Schism: Introducing the mavericks and structuralists to Firewall. n p. 51 [i]The First Schism: The split that defined the backups, conservatives, and pragmat n p. 23[/i] Repeated block? Page 13: Erasers are proxies now? Art seems inconsistent with all other EP publications. it feels far too soft... Field Ops: How Firewall works, from the first tip of trouble to when the last [b]ev[/b] n p. 55 Umm ambiguous? Ongoing Ops: What Firewall is up to. n p. 79 Notable Places: Secret labs, bunkers, and weapon caches, oh my. n p. 86 Firewall Spaces: Common-use places, from safehouses to online crypts. n p. 90 Notable Operatives: Some of Firewall's best and worst. n p. 100 [i]Relations with Relations with Others:[/i] umm reword a bit? bit of a redundant phrase Alliances and ongoing tensions. n p. 110 More to come:

Page 72 "Don't make things worse for yourself but telling them how to do their jobs." Should it be "...[i]by[/i] telling them how to do their jobs."

P. 175, the cost of "Laughing Policeman" is listed as "[Medium]." I assume that it should read [Moderate]." As an aside, I'm most amused that EP finally has their version of a light saber with the plasma sword. :)

hack pack accidentally includes the _MACOSX directory. And damn it the picture on page 28 is not in the hackpack :(

Argonaut Psychosurgeon pregen has Academics: Math, and every other instance has Academics: Mathematics

[s]Just glancing at the sample characters before work:[/s] Back from work. Posting more Errata :) [b]Firewall Crow:[/b] - Native Hungarian should be 95 with a +5 morph bonus (total is correct) - w/ Smartlink is listed for the characters weapons, however smartlink comes by default along with a safety system. [b]Firewall Eraser:[/b] - Climbing in the skill section has a morph bonus of 5 instead of 10. - [s]The opening parenthesis ( in the skill section looks like they have been replaced with {[/s] This is apparently depends on the magnification you look at it. But weirdly enough all the others look fine. I don't know what's going on here. - Profession: Missionary - the total is 60 but the base skill is 50. - w/ Smartlink is listed for the characters weapons, however smartlink comes by default along with a safety system. Is it listing the default smartlink (in which case it should also list the default safety system) or did the character buy a redundant smartlink (in which case it should be removed and their money refunded). - 'Enhancements' section is labeled 'Implants' - Don't know if this is an error but Snake is listed as an enhancement, I think this is its movement mode, but Roller isn't listed, so I don't know what is going on here. - The synths inherent armor is not listed in the armor section. - Heavy Combat Armor is not listed in the enhancement section - 'Low-QuBit Reservoir' should be 'Low-Capacity Qubit Reservoir' [b]Firewall Filter:[/b] - The characters primary weapon (a shard pistol) is listed under gear instead of the primary weapons section. - In the morph traits section, the type of social stigma is not listed. - In the gear section, 'Cleaners Nanoswarm' should be 'Cleaner Nanoswarm' (??) - 'Enhancements' section is labeled 'Implants' - Are you listing the movement modes in the enhancement section or not? This one doesn't have walker listed. - Was a smartlink and safety system bought for the pistol in addition to the included smartlink and safety system? In other products the default smartlink and safety system was not explicitly listed. - The skills from the characters skillsofts are not listed in the skills section. (The anarchist militia volunteer in Transhuman has the skillsoft ratings listed in parentheses). - The synths inherent armor is not listed in the armor section. [b]Firewall Register:[/b] - The aptitude for the blades skill is incorrectly listed as COG instead of SOM [b]Firewall Router:[/b] - The takko morph should be providing additional bonuses (+10) to the Free Fall and Climbing skills. - 'Enhancements' section is labeled 'Implants' - This one has its movement modes (Thrust Vector and Walker) listed in the Enhancements section as well but this one seems to have all of them. - Not really an error: This character has both mental speed and multiple personalities which is sort of an odd design choice. - The characters speed is listed as 1(2) but I can't find where the (2) is coming from. - The synths inherent armor is not listed in the armor section. - 'Low-QuBit Reservoir' should be 'Low-Capacity Qubit Reservoir' - In the gear section, 'Guardians Nanoswarm' should be 'Guardian Nanoswarm' (??) - In the gear section this characters weapons don't list the Smartlink and Safety systems. So were the others redundant add ons? I am so confused :( [b]Firewall Scanner:[/b] - Tracking Software is in the gear section instead of the software section - The characters speed should be 3, not 1(3) [b]Firewall Vector[/b] - Edited memories has a level after it. It probably shouldn't. - The character has speed 1(2), but nothing seems to be granting +1 speed. [b]Firewall Veteran Sentinel[/b] - In the ego traits: Mental Disorder has the exact disorder listed in parentheses in one case and after a colon in a second case. For consistency they should both be in parentheses - In the ego traits: Adaptability doesn't have a level listed. Was the (Level 1) from the Firewall Vector supposed to go here? - Okay, this character goes back to listing the smartlink/safety system for the weapons. Some consistency would be nice. [b]Argonaut Psychosurgeon[/b] - Academics: Math should be Academics: Mathematics. - Infiltration should not have a +10 morph bonus. - Interest: Exhumanists should be Interest: Exhumans. [b]Argonaut Reverse Engineer[/b] - Enhancements mislabeled implants. - Synth armor not listed in armor section. - Shockproof is useless as synthmorphs are immune to shock. - Hearing Filter and Vision Filter are useless, this character has cybernetic sight and hearing (which automatically include the filter) - Nanoswarms have plural on the first part of their name (This is awkward to say).

Pages 116 & 117 need to be flipped. 116 should come after 117. 117 is the left hand chapter heading 116 is the right hand of the spread. [edit] ... or perhaps not? Most of the time (but not always) in the other books the chapter number is on the left and the imagery crosses the gutter. However, this is also not the case with Firewall p.12 & 13. p.12 & 13 look like a design decision (passage of time left to right - planning a raid on the left, in the thick of it on the right), so 116 & 117 might intentionally break with convention. Hey, I'm a designer, I notice these things.

Page 39: "Unless we put you on a job you knew would result in [b]lack[/b], we let you leave on your good word you won’t share what you know." I think lack should have a capital "L"

p154 - Flavor 'knew what was about to happen and I just stood there.' Missing the leading I. Or capital. One of those.

p.152

Quote:

Several sentinels serve in MSP, their actions on our behalf so far clandestine.

"...on our behalf [i]are[/i] so far clandestine." or "...on our behalf so far [i]are[/i] clandestine." ?

Page 89, Paragraph 3 "In fact, the nature of the content brought it immediately to our intention." should be attention

More criticism than Errata, but the criticism thread was locked and folded into this one. The society of Jude was a nice attempt to flesh things out. However, the idea that "The good Catholics are really agnostics" is a bit on the nose. Replacing:

"Page 141 wrote:

As our understanding of the universe and transhumanity’s place in it has changed, so too has our understanding of God. Most of us are what you might call agnostics. In the end, that does not matter. What we do matters; how we act matters. To be as Jesus taught is not to venerate God while forgetting the weak and oppressed. It is to wash the feet of the lepers, to befriend the prostitutes, and to break bread with criminals.

with

"Suggested replacement" wrote:

While our understanding of the universe and transhumanity’s place in it has matured, it has not eroded our faith. We hold to the old Jesuit standard. "The sabbath was made for man, and not man for the sabbath." God gave us religion to help humanity, To be as Jesus taught is not to venerate God while forgetting the weak and oppressed. It is to wash the feet of the lepers, to befriend the prostitutes, and to break bread with criminals.

Would recast them as a religious group what does good because of their faith, rather than despite their religion.

@lalande: in regards to Firewall Router, a friend of mine and I are of the opinion that it is actually a custom cuddlefish morph :P Kremlin: Did you notice the reference to your backstory toward the beginning :P And ya I did not want redundant threads going sorry mate. But ya through out inconsistencies and suggestions in here. it has not gone to the printers yet! :P

The one in the beginning I might have missed, but the Promethian I am related to at the back made me grin a lot.

Page 49: "the base of operations for Operation KUDZU." Strike "operations for" as the title Operation Kudzu makes the first use of the word operation redundant. Kremlin ya in the beginning there is a blurb about how a bunch of people evacuated through an mmo. can't recall its page though :P

Pg. 162, header 'Running Background Checks', third paragraph - 'XX' page reference. Pg. 168, header 'The Fall and Aftermath', first paragraph - seems like "whomever created the TITANs" should read "whomever created the Prometheans" instead. Pg. 101, Bento Gelzer description, second paragraph - "They retain some of his pre-Fall wealth" should be " They retain some of their pre-Fall wealth".

kindalas wrote:

Also happy cake day.

Thanks! :D