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Rimward Errata Thread

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Wed, 2012-07-25 14:00
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CodeBreaker CodeBreaker's picture
Rimward Errata Thread
And with the discussion thread, we also get an errata thread. It is a truth in RPG publishing that there are always going to be mistakes that sneak past proofreaders. If you happen to find one, and no one has posted about it yet, here is the place to put it. Lets help make Rimward the very best book it can be.
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Wed, 2012-07-25 14:03
blarney blarney's picture
Not a book erratum, but the
Not a book erratum, but the note from PS regarding my purchase of Rimward thanked me for buying Panopticon. :)
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Wed, 2012-07-25 14:07
CodeBreaker CodeBreaker's picture
Gonna just edit this post as
Gonna just edit this post as I go! Page 59 has an editors note in the top right hand corner.
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Wed, 2012-07-25 19:18
The Green Slime The Green Slime's picture
p. 64, top of 2nd column:
p. 64, top of 2nd column: "But those who’ve chosen to think in geolog- ical time are not as common as one might expect." Presume should be uncommon
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Thu, 2012-07-26 00:40
Thampsan Thampsan's picture
pg. 93 (under 'Northern
pg. 93 (under 'Northern Diaspora' second paragraph) 'For the egovasting' - should be egocasting.
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Thu, 2012-07-26 01:29
Thampsan Thampsan's picture
pg. 95 (under Ministry of
pg. 95 (under Ministry of Justice and Equality, second paragraph, line 7) 'operations planet-side on Titan to dat' - should be date.
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Thu, 2012-07-26 01:50
Thampsan Thampsan's picture
pf. 107 (under University
pf. 107 (under University City, paragraph 5, line 6 and 7) "The marmosets were not to have been venomous; hunting them all down took weeks." - Not sure.
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Thu, 2012-07-26 04:48
babayaga babayaga's picture
pg. 196, "Immigrating to
pg. 196, "Immigrating to Bright". The text says "Individuals displaying [COG] scores of 40 or higher...". According to the core rules it is not possible to have aptitudes above 40.
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Thu, 2012-07-26 05:57
AdamJury AdamJury's picture
CodeBreaker wrote:Gonna just
CodeBreaker wrote:
Gonna just edit this post as I go! Page 59 has an editors note in the top right hand corner.
I fixed this, and uploaded a new version of the PDF, yesterday. Hilarious that the editor's note -- which I wrote -- refers to a sidebar that was cut completely in the end. (It ended up showing up due to some complicated layer merging stuff that I do late in the PDF production...)
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Thu, 2012-07-26 14:34
Decivre Decivre's picture
The writeup for the Ego
The writeup for the Ego Sharing modification is rather confusing. On the Fenris morph, it is explicitly stated that you need to buy more Ego Sharing modifications to increase the number of egos in the morph. In the Ego Sharing modification section, it's implied that only one Ego Sharing enhancement is needed, and you simply need to add more cyberbrains. This needs clarification, as each has a dramatically differing price.
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Thu, 2012-07-26 14:49
Xagroth Xagroth's picture
Decivre wrote:The writeup for
Decivre wrote:
The writeup for the Ego Sharing modification is rather confusing. On the Fenris morph, it is explicitly stated that you need to buy more Ego Sharing modifications to increase the number of egos in the morph. In the Ego Sharing modification section, it's implied that only one Ego Sharing enhancement is needed, and you simply need to add more cyberbrains. This needs clarification, as each has a dramatically differing price.
Also the Fenrir, while having space for 2 egos, only list 1 cyberbrain...
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Thu, 2012-07-26 15:35
CodeBreaker CodeBreaker's picture
Also, the Fenrirs '4 Limbs'
Also, the Fenrirs '4 Limbs' and 'Large Target (+10 to hit)' appear to be bolded.
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Thu, 2012-07-26 23:19
Janusfaced Janusfaced's picture
May I post about a layout
May I post about a layout problem at here? p98 and 142 In right framework, background are not wide enough, so it is hard to read left-side characters sometimes.
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Fri, 2012-07-27 06:15
psiili psiili's picture
miss-spelling in "Into the White"
In the short story, "Into the White", the graffiti "Paska kaupunni" has a spelling mistake. The word is written "kaupunki". While juvenile taggers have a distinct tendency towards illiteracy, I wouldn't expect a highly educated professional to make such mistakes. Unless it was intentional, in slang / dialect, or the scribbler was someone else. Also, IMO a better translation of "Oulu: paska kaupunki" to english would be "Oulu: shitty town/city".
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Fri, 2012-07-27 12:08
AdamJury AdamJury's picture
Janusfaced wrote:May I post
Janusfaced wrote:
May I post about a layout problem at here? p98 and 142 In right framework, background are not wide enough, so it is hard to read left-side characters sometimes.
I can't seem to replicate this ... what are you using to read the file?
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Fri, 2012-07-27 12:44
Janusfaced Janusfaced's picture
AdamJury wrote:Janusfaced
AdamJury wrote:
Janusfaced wrote:
May I post about a layout problem at here? p98 and 142 In right framework, background are not wide enough, so it is hard to read left-side characters sometimes.
I can't seem to replicate this ... what are you using to read the file?
I use Adobe Reader 8... but I retry and it works now. I still not sure why that problem happened a little ago, but it might be my problem. I'm sorry for all the fuss.
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Fri, 2012-07-27 13:09
Capricorn Capricorn's picture
Problems with Reader8
I encountered the same problem with Acrobat/Reader 8. Higher versions seem to work OK.
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Sat, 2012-07-28 10:17
Dr. Black Dr. Black's picture
p. 86:
p. 86: The two moons in the L4 und L5 points of Tethys are called: „Tethys and Calypso“, so Tethys is revolving around itself. According to Wikipedia the first one is Telesto.
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Wed, 2012-08-01 20:56
Azathoth Azathoth's picture
Page 133, Brinker War inset.
Page 133, Brinker War inset. Second collumn, third line "and it went escalated from there" th went should probably be dropped. :)
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Sun, 2012-08-05 19:08
Thampsan Thampsan's picture
pg. 74 (under Thoroughgood,
pg. 74 (under Thoroughgood, first paragraph, line 11-12) "Even the Jovians maintain a small and impressively detachment here". Should be "maintain a small but impressive detachment here". [Edit: Corrected spelling mistake]
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Sat, 2012-08-04 22:38
Re-Laborat Re-Laborat's picture
I don't know if I would
I don't know if I would characterize the Jovians as butch, Thampsan, I'm sure they have their share of femmes, too. Maybe you meant "small but impressive detachment"?
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Sun, 2012-08-05 19:09
Thampsan Thampsan's picture
Thank you for that, sometimes
Thank you for that, sometimes my dyslexia gets the better of me.
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Mon, 2012-08-06 10:49
PurpleXVI PurpleXVI's picture
Page 186, Fenrir Morph
"The most common weapons mounted are linked HEAP and/or plasmaburst seeker launchers, [b]exoatmospheric plasma beam bolters[/b]" Shouldn't that be "[b]particle[/b] beam bolters"? It's a minor nitpick, admittedly.
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Mon, 2012-08-06 19:12
Copper Airplane Copper Airplane's picture
Saturn Habitat Populations
p.77 Kiviuq Monastery under the habitat description it lists "Population: 50" but in the text's second paragraph, fifth line is "There are only a little more than a thousand people here, ..." p.81 Marseilles under the habitat description it lists "Population: 800,000" but in the text's third paragraph, first line is "Marseilles is home to some 80,000."
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Tue, 2012-08-07 00:52
Copper Airplane Copper Airplane's picture
Other Problems
p.84 Getting Around second paragraph, reason to hire unlicensed guide "There’s only one good reason to hire an unlicensed guide: if you want to find someone. Some people go to Kronos to disappear, some simply arrive and try to vanish, and a good licensed guide may be able to help you find them." p.106 The Tenor of the Debate "who quarreled withCustovic over" is missing a space between with and Custovic p.121 Exemplars "Those with this level or recognition often" should be of instead of or p.150 Autonomist Organizations "best examples for this is the Fissure Gate Task Force" but "FGTG groups can be found" should be "FGTF groups" p.184 Titan's Carbon Haze "Because of this, almost all devices microfactured for use on Titan rely on radio signals instead of lasers. Assume that any gear whose description gives a choice between using lasers and radio for communication employs lasers." While it could be true as is, I think it's meant to be "communication employs radios."
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Tue, 2012-08-07 05:02
Nike Nike's picture
pg.191 Fractal Gloves
pg.191 Fractal Gloves These gloves reference the fractal digits robotic enhancement from the core EP book. It is mistakenly labeled as (p.31, EP) when it should be (p.311, EP).
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Sun, 2012-08-12 15:02
CodeBreaker CodeBreaker's picture
pg.72 Mental Augmentations
pg.72 Mental Augmentations "Current predictions are that the total number of users on Bright will stabilize at 15–25% of the population, but that’s a lot number of people using a technology that may have unforeseen longterm effects." Granted, my grammar is far from perfect. But that doesn't sound right? 'but that's a lot number'. 'a high number' perhaps? Not sure.
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Sat, 2012-09-22 14:20
Lalande21185 Lalande21185's picture
PDF Title
I noticed that the title of my copy of the pdf is "Eclipse [b]Phae[/b]: Rimward".
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Sat, 2012-09-22 17:19
AdamJury AdamJury's picture
Lalande21185 wrote:I noticed
Lalande21185 wrote:
I noticed that the title of my copy of the pdf is "Eclipse [b]Phae[/b]: Rimward".
Heh ... yeah, minor metadata error. Whoops -- will fix that up at some point. :)
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Mon, 2012-10-22 00:58
anth anth's picture
Rimward Errata
Pg 101: "Valikko served as carbon mining engineer on a team of four" ... "Two of the four victims" There is one too many victims. Pg 161 "Several members of Blue Rose are also prominent chrome advocates" What is "chrome", or should it be "CRAM"? Pg 182 refers to the use of QE comms for egocasting and gives the page number from the core book. I think we need to know how how many qubits are required for an ego, probably using qubit reservoirs as the unit. Do the COG score requirements for Bright only allow the raw scores or are the morph and implant bonuses included? What about the skill scores required for Ultimate ranks, do those include bonuses?
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Sun, 2012-10-28 19:15
matthra matthra's picture
Looking at the ship travel
Looking at the ship travel time table, and according to the chart mars is closer to mercury than earth, which I believe is in error. As an interesting aside, Average Speed appears to vary between 326,503 kilometers per hour and 730,794 kilometers per hour.
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Wed, 2012-11-28 17:53
Sjenks Sjenks's picture
RE Travel times, I don't see
RE Travel times, I don't see the Mercury problem but, Earth is closer to the Belt and Jupiter than Mars, which isn't right. I wonder it is because of how they averaged.
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Fri, 2012-11-30 05:38
Lorsa Lorsa's picture
matthra wrote:Looking at the
matthra wrote:
Looking at the ship travel time table, and according to the chart mars is closer to mercury than earth, which I believe is in error. As an interesting aside, Average Speed appears to vary between 326,503 kilometers per hour and 730,794 kilometers per hour.
It is possible to Mars to closer to Mercury than Earth depending on where in their orbits they are currently located. Similairly it is possible for the distance Earth-Jupiter to be shorter than Mars-Jupiter. The problem with writing down travel times between planets is that they tend to keep changing their relative positions.
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Sun, 2018-09-23 12:12
AdamJury AdamJury's picture
As we head into the era where
As we head into the era where we release every Eclipse Phase first edition title as print on demand: if you have seen any other items in Rimward that require correction or clarification, please post them in this thread!
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Wed, 2018-09-26 19:12
Chernoborg Chernoborg's picture
Finally gonna get this fixed :)
Okay, I've been sitting on this one for a LONG time! Pg. 3 : " KUIPER BEL " in the chapter header should be " KUIPER BELT "
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Tue, 2018-10-02 11:27
AdamJury AdamJury's picture
Chernoborg wrote:Okay, I've
Chernoborg wrote:
Okay, I've been sitting on this one for a LONG time! Pg. 3 : " KUIPER BEL " in the chapter header should be " KUIPER BELT "
Oh, that's hilarious! The table of contents are generated automatically and then touched up for legibility/clarity ... and I chopped off the " (30–55 AU)" from that header, and also the t. (Editing the TOCs is always an interesting process, because if you edit them TOO much, sometimes InDesign loses the ability to turn them into hyperlinks, and you need to... start over.)
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Tue, 2018-10-23 22:31
DocRodgers DocRodgers's picture
If we're on the subject...
I know this is a minor issue, but I noticed Rimward maintained a general theme where speeds are written as kph, and context suggests this is a shortening of Kilometers per Hour. The norm for this phrase to be shortened to Km/h.
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Wed, 2018-10-24 05:19
CordialUltimate2 CordialUltimate2's picture
It is an american thing it is
It is an american thing it is analogous to mph.
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