There was a slight grammer error I spotted, need to look through again but it was along the lines of "despite their please" rather then "despite their pleas" I'll trawl through where I think it is and give a page refence in a few minutes.

First off thanks for Gatecrashing, I'm very impressed with it. As others have said about the Aquanaut: 200 meters is a lot more than 6 atmospheres of pressure (assuming earth-like conditions) and 200 feet would be about right for that pressure. For a morph designed for use underwater this isn't very impressive, and dolphins do better despite lacking gills, so I'm inclined to think it was meant to be 200m. Admittedly it looks like Aquanauts can stay at those depths long term rather than just the brief dive a dolphin or normal human could do without lots of equipment and decompression time. What is considered a safe depth for recreational dives varies. 40m, and no compulsory deco stops, is the limit for PADI and probably all the other big American dive training organisations. The British Sub Aqua Club, on the other hand, have 50m as part of their normal qualification progression (ie not as a speciality course for those wanting to go deep), and deco is taught for the earlier qualification level which has a max depth of 35m. As the morph is breathing liquid rather than gas there won't be a problem with narcosis. A scuba diver at 40m on air will be breathing a gas with partial pressures of around 1.1 bar (or atmospheres) of oxygen and 3.9 of nitrogen. All this extra gas impairs brain function for reasons we don't understand, and the effects can be reduced by changing the gas mix. An aquanaut on the other hand will only have the oxygen that gets extracted from the water, hopefully somewhere around 0.21 bar, plus the 0.79 bar of nitrogen that was in its lungs from the surface. Even if an Oxygen Reserve implant is added I'd expect it to keep the oxygen partial pressure at a set level. I guess it is a bit more complicated as either the lungs need to compress a lot or the chest needs to be able to withstand the pressure difference between the inside and outside of the chest. If it is the former we're back to a high partial pressure for nitrogen. I've said far too much about this given that I'm just going to assume it is 200m, and that the text within the brackets should be "roughly 21 atmospheres of pressure" or "roughly 20 atmospheres of extra pressure". Anyway I noticed a few minor issues ... Page 87 The infobox says Corse is a "Tidally-Locked Rocky Jovian Moon". The main text says "Just a big icy rock, part of a thin, open ring system around a gas giant that happens to rise dramatically over the horizon a few minutes after I arrive." There shouldn't be a planet rise if it is tidally locked. Page 139 The infobox for Wormwood says "Gravity: Micro (0.02 max)". The main text says "The asteroid rotates and the regions outside of the central gate area experience a gentle microgravity, up to 0.2 g." Looks like one of these has the decimal point in the wrong place. Page 159 The Life Support Pack has a cost of "[Medium]", it should probably be "[Moderate]".

Hi all, recent uplift here. Just a quick query/possible errata. Gatecrashing, p163 The Crasher Truck is listed as having all of the equipment of a GEV (EP, p348) minus hydrogen engines, which includes "several desktop CMs", each of which is [Expensive], not to mention all the other included features. However, a Crasher Truck's price is listed as [High]. Shouldn't the price of a Crasher Truck also be [Expensive], at least?